module 7 dis

I need 30-40 words response on the replies that i sent. Later, i will send you my initial post to fix it according to the feedback.
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Examples are important in writing because they help illustrate the point a writer is trying to make. Use at least one of this module’s readings (**from list on page four of module lecture) to explain the importance of using examples when writing. 
Your answer should consist of a well-developed paragraph or two, which means the first sentence should answer the question(s) (i.e., topic sentence), and the following sentences should support the topic sentence. The paragraph(s) should be unified and coherent with specific supporting details or examples from the story. The sentences should be clear, concise, and arranged in a logical order. Transitions, pronouns, and repetition should be used to provide coherence. The paragraph(s) should follow a definition format.
Readings lists are given below:  Use one reading from the list. You can google about those readings. You will find the article.
 At least one of the following texts from the Blair Reader:

“The Gayest One” by Brett Krutzsch
“The Curious Grammar of Police Shootings” by Radley Balko
“Sexism in English: Embodiment and Language” by Alleen Pace Nilsen